My hometown is full of farmers

Most of people in our hometown are farmers. They plant rice in ricefields and work from morning to afternoon. They work hard with hope of getting good harvest. When rainy season come, it is time for cultivating the fields, making seedbed, then planting the rice. Planting is usually not done alone, ever less, for them whose fields are large. They hire people to help. When the rice become yellow, they harvest it. The farmers feel really happy because their efforts are not useless. Having been harvested, the rice is cleaned and dried, then saved in ricebarn. Sometimes, the dried rice is sold to get some money. By using the money, they will buy their house needs.

However, it is not many of them who are rich. Many factors cause, why they are poor. One, government aid is not a lot in supplying fertilizers, poisons and drugs. They have to buy by theirselves in high prices. Two, dry season sometimes happen in a long time. The fields become dry and water stock decrease, or even empty. Three, irrigation system is quite bad. The farmers whose ricefields in lower land do not get enough water. Four, the price of rice decrease, while the price of house needs increase, so that they feel harmed. The last factors which make them keep poor is plant diseases, pests, mice, and birds which attack and destroy their rice.

Although they are poor as farmers, they keep diligent and patient. In addition, their family relation is so strong that they help each other. That is why they are all, become the happy farmers.

This is story of my hometown, lies far away in north sumatera I can describe. Thank you for your attention.

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Tebeeeeet!!!

When somebody asked me where is my favorite place in Jakarta, I’m going to say Tebet, why? Well there are several reasons. (There are several reasons why I like Tebet or Tebet is my favourite place in jakarta for several reasons ).
First, Tebet is located in the busiest district in Jakarta, South Jakarta.
Vehicles going on and on everyday around Tebet. That’s because Tebet is very strategic.
You can easily go anywhere in Jakarta from Tebet, because there are a lot of transportations you can take from Tebet.
Second, you can get anything in Tebet. And I really mean anything!
Tebet has a lot of facilities for everyone.
For example, if you want to exercise your body, Tebet has a lot of sport facilities.
Young, old, rich, poor, everyone can use it.
Or if you a little bit classy, you can take gym so you can work your body out.
If you get hungry, Tebet provides them.
Many kind of food you can choose in Tebet, from traditional food, to new age food.
For parents whose children are going to school, there are a lot of school available in Tebet too.
From kindergarten to high school, Tebet has it.
Those teenagers who love to shop can find some interesting stores in Tebet. The price quite reachable, though the stuff has some quality too.
But why do exactly I like Tebet the most?
Well the answer quite simple.
It's because i live there!

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